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| Alara; Tryin' this out | |
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| Topic Started: Aug 6 2009, 05:26 PM (288 Views) | |
| Emz | Aug 6 2009, 05:26 PM Post #1 |
 
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Okay, there might be a lot of mistakes with this, so bear with me here. Name: Alara Dragon Type: Western European Age: 12 Gender: Female Clan: Juthivar Clan position desired: 2nd Scout Desired Magic: Wind: Learning Healing: Very Good Water: Mastered Appearance: Alara is a bit short for her age, about sixteen feet in height and thirty-two feet in length. She has very light blue scales, some areas almost white, and on the edges of her wings and elsewhere on her joints, it appears to be a faded black. She has elegant wings as the wingspan is sixty-six feet all the way across. They are silky soft, generally feeling like a soft blanket. Her wings are white with some darkened areas. With her being smaller, she doesn't have as much muscle as some dragons her age, but her mastering at flight has helped her achieve tough goals, like running away and hiding in small places. Her spikes start at the back of her head as a dark blue and start to fade once they reach the bottom of her neck. Her talons are pure black which give them a intimidating look, although she doesn't intend it to be that way. The aqua blue colored eyes that she has, give her an innocent look. Personality: Alara isn't at all agressive, but when times call for it, her anger and fear can get the best of her. Her kind and innocent attitude really carry her along through tough situations, along with her will power which gives her most of the courage she needs. She is a very curious dragon who get's into some trouble without even knowing it sometimes. Her love for flying and trying out new things seems to be one of her favorite things, even though she knows the others think of her wierdly. Nothing fazes her broad mind, even when something terrible happens. Sometimes, she gets down on herself for something so little but always jumps back a day or two later. History: Even though she was born in a small cave without a father, her mother cared for her for as long as she could withhold her energetic hatchling. But about a year after Alara's birth (in dragon years), her mother died of a disease she knew nothing about. She became an orphan that day. It was extremely hard for her to survive but soon came along a young male who accepted her as his child. The male dragon cared for her until he died from a fight with an older and bigger dragon. She was very young at that age, only about four years old, and could still remember his roars of pain and him telling her to run for as long as her wings could take her. After a few years after his death, after years of running and hiding, she came upon a group of dragons about her age. They were simply hunting by the Selicarian Lake when she came upon them, so she tried to join them. They saw her trying to get some of their kill, so they scared her away, but Alara's curiosity got the best of her. She always got into trouble with the group of dragons, until finally, they accepted her into their group. After years of living with the dragons, it was so peaceful with plentiful hunting places and a nice cold source for water. All was great when some larger older dragons flew over their territory one day. Alara could feel the fear stir inside her again, just like the night her guardian was killed. Without saying a word, she had run away, not looking at the massive killing behind her. One of the massive dragons saw her and chased her for hundreds of miles until he got tired when Alara was just getting started. Her wings carried her to a clan that she knew as Juthivar, right on the Plains of Juthivar. She was really well at scouting, so she thought she'd try out a position there and got it, although it took her awhile to gain friends. Picture:  EDIT: Can I still say that she has the black scales on her wings and joints? I think the color looks cool, if you know what I mean. But if not, I understand. Edited by Emz, Sep 27 2009, 07:43 PM.
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| Kari | Aug 6 2009, 05:49 PM Post #2 |
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Nice, Em. If I look at your pictur, the 'black areas at the edges of your wings and joints' are the shadows and the 'almost white areas' where the light falls. COuld be better to just say light blue. I need wing color as well. Also, black talons would have anything mut a timid look. Timid means shy. XD Maybe you meant intimidating? Also, what are the 'tough goals achieved'? Example please? XD Hm. Personality seems fine. XD how old was she when the new dad died? Could she fly at all? Was she at an age she'd have some change of survival? Where were they hunting and so on? For places, you can scroll down the main index and see. Other than these details, a nice character, Emily! I look forward to meeting her. 
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| Emz | Aug 6 2009, 06:09 PM Post #3 |
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Darn, I knew you'd hit me with something like that :P. |
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| Kari | Aug 6 2009, 06:31 PM Post #4 |
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You CAN keep the black, of course. Just be a little more specific; not 'random patches' but, say 'the edges of her wing'. Okie, you fixed it. Character approved. |
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| Kari | Aug 6 2009, 06:31 PM Post #5 |
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Your character has been accepted. |
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