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| Lac'alen; Two Personalities | |
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| Topic Started: Jan 2 2010, 10:53 AM (314 Views) | |
| Valamuraka | Jan 2 2010, 10:53 AM Post #1 |
Young Adult Dragon
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Name- Lac’alen Type- European Western Age- 21 Gender- Female Clan- Bahiri Clan Position- Lead Healer Magic Desired- Water (mastered) Earth (almost mastered) Healing (mastered) Appearance- Her scales are a crystal clear sapphire blue. They are triangular in shape and are all about the same size. They are almost flat against her body which helps her glide through the water. When she is in the water, she blends in perfectly. Her spikes and talons are a midnight black and are as hard as diamonds. Her wing membrane is a cerulean blue and her belly scales are a black color. Her eye color is the same shade of cerulean blue as her wing membrane. She has webbing between her toes and they are a pale blue. Her ear shape looks like her wings, and behind them are her gills. She stands roughly 23 feet tall, she is 46 feet long and her wingspan is about 93 feet. She is slim but muscular, which helps her glide through the water and sky. She has two long horns coming out of the top of her head, pointing back, and they are about 18 inches long. She has smaller spikes around her jaw line and they are between half an inch to two inches. She also has a heart shaped mark on the base of her neck and it is a couple of shades darker than her scales. Personality- Lac’alen is kind, caring and shy. She likes to make friends but it takes her a bit longer to warm up to others. When she has finally warmed up to her friends, she will do anything to keep them safe. She is kind to others but she has another side. It is the complete opposite of the kind, caring and shy side. When someone makes her angry, she doesn’t show it, it just builds up on her darker side. Once every month, her dark side takes over her light side completely. When her darker side is in control, she is rude, mean, and she yells at others. But sometimes some of her lighter side is strong enough to stay and she leaves for the night and when she is away, she tries to learn how to control her other side. Only recently has her darker side started to take control more frequently. History- She was born to the two lead healers of her clan. She was born and raised on one of the many sandy beaches on an island not far from Selzar. When she was 5, she came upon a wounded bird. She felt so sad that she would do anything to help it. She closed her eyes and started to cry when she heard a chirp. The bird had completely healed. She told her parents what had happened they told her that one of her magic abilities had started to show. Since her parents were healers, she knew that one of her magic abilities would be healing. After that day, she didn’t know that her personality had split. When she got older, her darker side had started to control her. One day, her mother asked her if she wanted to train to be a healer, Lac’alen said yes. So her mother started to train her in the way of healing. Lac’alen caught on quickly and knew how to heal just about as well as her parents. Both of them said that if she kept doing what she did, she would be lead healer of another clan one day. During the years of her training, more of her magic abilities started to show. First, after her healing, came water. She learned how to use it even quicker than healing since she was a water dragon. She mastered it before the age of 14. Last she started to use earth but it was difficult to learn. When she got to the age of 17 she decided to leave her clan in search of another. She traveled west to the island of Selzar and started there. She searched for a clan for at least seven months to a year. She ran into a few clans but to her they just weren’t the right ones. They didn’t live near the water, which felt uncomfortable to her. She continued her journey for a new clan for another three months. During her journey, she came upon a wounded dragon which its cuts had been infected. Just like the bird, she wanted to help it. She had an idea that maybe she could use water to cure the infections. She flew to a lake and took some water back to the wounded dragon. Then she concentrated real hard on both healing and water. Then the wounds cleaned out and weren't infected anymore. She couldn't believe it. Then she left to continue on her journey for a new clan. She flew around for another three months when she came upon a beach. She didn’t know that it belonged to the Bahiri clan.She thought that the location was beautiful. It reminded her of home. Crystal clear water, sandy beaches, lush plants, beautiful skies, her type of place. She flew around the place and found some of the clan members. She wasn’t sure if to just fly by or to go down and introduce herself. She heard a voice inside her head saying Just fly away, they won’t take you in even if it killed them. They won't accept the fact that your a freak, that you have two personalities and how you heal using water to heal, they will just turn you away. When she heard her other side say that she made her decision. She ignored the voice and flew down to the dragons to introduce herself. It turns out that they were water dragons as well. After a while she asked if she could join their clan. She also asked if she could be a healer, since she was unique to it. Edited by Valamuraka, Jan 2 2010, 10:40 PM.
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| Emz | Jan 2 2010, 01:45 PM Post #2 |
 
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You have her magic count mixed up. Energy counts as two, not one, so you could take one of the element magics out to fix it. You were probably just distracted like I am a lot :P. Also, I don't think healing can bring any creature back to life, even small animals. It can only help the living, I'm pretty sure. Otherwise, those two personalities are very interesting. I wonder how she will act to other dragons during her dark side. |
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| Silvera | Jan 2 2010, 03:22 PM Post #3 |
Dragon of the masters
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Yes, magic that can bring other creatures back to life is forbidden because it is not realistic. So she won't be able to do that. Also water magic alone cannot heal injuries to the flesh. It can be used to say cure infections from a wound or the blood itself, but would also need to be mixed with a bit of healing magic in order to repair any physical damage that has been done. Also, like Emz said, the magic is off a bit as well, (You have too many points). Other than that it's good. |
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| Valamuraka | Jan 2 2010, 08:40 PM Post #4 |
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Fixed(i think) Yeah about the magic, I was in a hurry so I didnt get a good look at how much energy was. And about the healing flesh injuries with water, I wasnt sure about that so thanks for telling me and bringing back the dead. Lets hope I got it right. |
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| Silvera | Jan 2 2010, 10:17 PM Post #5 |
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She wasn’t sure if to just fly by or to go down and introduce herself. She heard a voice inside her head saying Just fly away, they won’t take you in even if it killed them. They won't accept the fact that your a freak, that you have two personalities and how you heal using water and bring things back from the dead, they will just turn you away. When she heard her other side say that she made her decision. She ignored the voice and flew down to the dragons to introduce herself. It turns out that they were water dragons as well. After a while she asked if she could join their clan. She also asked if she could be a healer, since she was unique to it. I think that you forgot to edit out the bringing back to life here. I didn't see it anywhere else, so I figured you just forgot it. |
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| Valamuraka | Jan 2 2010, 10:27 PM Post #6 |
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Yeah I didXP I'll fix it. |
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| Silvera | Jan 2 2010, 10:45 PM Post #7 |
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Dragon of the masters
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Your character has been accepted. |
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