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| Topic Started: Apr 3 2010, 03:19 PM (199 Views) | |
| Deleted User | Apr 3 2010, 03:19 PM Post #1 |
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Name: Karzack Dragon Type: Western European Age: 25 Gender: Male Clan: Juthivar Clan position desired: Lead Hunter if not then 2nd Hunter Desired Magic: Fire (Mastered) Earth (Mastered) Wind (strong) Water (medium) Appearance: Karzack is 25ft tall, 60ft long from nose to tail, and his wingspan 120ft tip to tip. He is an astonishing large winged dragon and long because of his tail. The reason for his length is it is measured if he stretched his head straight out and his rather long tail out. His length has no benefits but his large wings allow him to fly faster then most. Karzack is a slim, light, and agile dragon, despite his length and wing size. Karzack is red, from his jaw to the tip of his tail. He has rather a lot of spikes on his head, long ones. Unlike most dragons, he has ears like a mammal, not like a reptile that dragons are. His front plate scales seam spikes as well. His scales overlap for protection; the scales on his body are shaped to his body to offer more mobility. His eyes are a very bright blue, almost neon like. His claws and teeth are white. His spikes are either yellow tipped or red tipped. However, the spikes on his wings are all yellow. Karzack’s wings are yellow, red like an ember and the central color is ember yellow, and the edges are ember red. The lower parts of his wings are black at the edges, red in the center and black on the inside (Further detail in picture). He has a row of spikes on his forearms from the elbow down. On his tail is a series of razor sharp blade spikes able to cut through scales but only if just enough force is applied, simply grazing it would only scratch the scales deeply. The strangest thing about Karzack is that his type is that his tail splits in two he is able to move them both independently. Personality: Karzack is a prideful dragon, he will protect his pride, even if it means showing one a lesson. Karzack will protect his home to the death if necessary, his large wings will allow him to glide and one flap will get him going very well, with his strength and size of wings he is even faster then his adopted son Silva, he is made for fighting. He is an excellent teacher he knows all about the other powers even though he does not have the skill to use them, so he uses the four elements. Karzack is very kind, and respectful if his pride is not attacked. Karzack likes to be out in the sun and even more during a sunset. Karzack loves how he looks, he loves it because he is nothing like any other dragon, no dragon has wings like his, no dragon has a tail like his, almost none have spikes, plate scales like him, and fewer yet have ears like a mammal. He takes pride in this, and hates it if one mocks him of his deferens, last time some one mocked him for how he looked he almost killed him along with the others before that. The necklace he holds is his mates who died long ago, if one asks it make him hurt to think of why he got it in the first place. History: When Karzack was born everyone from his home, isle of a 40 dragons was astonished and shocked, he looked nothing like his parents or any of his ancestors, only his eyes matched his mothers, the color is no surprise for it natural for a dragon to be the total apposite of their parents. However, his appearance is nothing like normal dragons, his wings, his scales, his ears, his tail, and the fact that he has no horns just long deadly spikes. Karzack’s life was mostly simple, never leaving his family or the isle for that fact, nothing much happened, he lived his childhood days in paradise, at home at least, when out with the other young dragons the older ones picked on him. When he was young, he did not know how to fight, occasionally he would get in a fight and horribly lose, occasionally the attacker hurt himself on Karzack’s spikes but not much. On those times, he would go home hurt, bruised, sometimes injured. His father taught him how to defend himself, but Karzack took it a step further; he sought out the warriors to teach him how to properly fight. He may have been young but he needed it. For a while, he did not get good enough to fend off the cruel young dragons, but after several months, the tides began to turn, he began winning more and more fights until one day the fights seemed to be as he was the better and the others were like him when young. In his teen years Karzack began to explore more, his biggest dream was to explore beyond the isle, in these years he was now the bigger one, his childhood bullies were now shorter and smaller then he was. Karzack began to learn how to be a proper hunter, but he was a slow learner, going through trial and error to improve his skills. In his teens Karzack did nothing more then learn to be a hunter and in hiss spare time dream of what the world was like beyond the isle. However, what he did not know was that the world was far different then he had dreamed about. Many found him beautiful, but those who were rude like other young males his age teased him, yet only to end up critically injured by Karzack. When he was a young adult, he decided to learn magic, but his family and the tribe he was in forbid it. So he secretly seeked out any one who knows magic, when he did he found his special was the elements. When he mastered them at eighteen, he revealed that he knew but kept his trainers a secret. The elders were furious with him they tried to banish him from the tribe but the other magic users stepped out and revealed their selves some were the elders, most were their sons. They told the other elders if they wanted to banish him you will have to banish us. However, the Elders could not banish their own sons and daughters. Karzack and the others were aloud to stay; the elders soon realized that magic could be helpful the healers healed injuries originally impossible to heal and illness originally incurable. However, it did not stop some from teasing Karzack of his appearance yet they all ended up critically injured. At 19 Silva got a mate they both picked a spot in the most beautiful place on the isle to live, at 20 his mate was pregnant and laid the eggs shortly after. All seemed to be paradise until one day a severely ill dragon came crawling into the city, the healers could not cure him the slightest bit, before they knew it the disease spread like wildfire. Karzack and his mate stayed away from the villages, the hatchlings hatched and were healthy, they planed to carry them away from the isle everyone ells was dyeing and nothing could stop it, when they were going to leave his mate caught the mysterious illness. His hatchlings short after, Karzack wished he would hatch the illness already and die with her but he lived though it all, his mate died in his arms, his hatchlings as well. Yet Strangely Karzack was never infected, he wishes he had but he was not. He took his mates necklace she always wore when he gave it to her, and then he left the isle after cleaning up and giving everyone a proper burial. Then he washed up and headed towards the major clans. He lives never forgetting the day his mate died in front of his eyes. Later on after hearing a dragon scream for help, he rushed over but was too late he watched the dragons take off leaving the dead family behind. He went over to see if any one lived, none did. When he was about to leave he heard something over the cliff when he went to check it out there he saw a young dragon no more then half a dragon year old. He adopted the dragon, he helped the young dragon, and however, he has never told him that it was he who saved him. 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| Thanatos | Apr 10 2010, 04:06 PM Post #2 |
 
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I don't know about the razor sharp blade spikes. You will have to go into a little more detail on them. Since he can move his tail(s) could he use it as a sword? Can they cut through dragon scale even if someone just happens to get grazed by them? For his history put a little more in. You have him having eggs with his mate at 20 and then everything else going on. In 5 dragon years, a lot can happen. |
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| Deleted User | Apr 10 2010, 07:20 PM Post #3 |
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Ok i added some history and a little more appearance detail i hope that is good enough |
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| Thanatos | Apr 10 2010, 08:54 PM Post #4 |
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Looks good. Accepted. |
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| Thanatos | Apr 10 2010, 08:54 PM Post #5 |
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Your character has been accepted. |
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